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One day I wore my body inside outAnd the people stared at my bonesHeld together withNails and. strings Entangled .. fear and twisted logic oflittle creatureswho held the endsas I stumbled across the...

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Held together withNails and. stringsGood lines......It is my solace, my home, the place where my walls crumble and fall away, because no one can know who I truly am. Thank goodness for the Internet,...

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Nice job with this one David !

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Damn...that's a powerful image...revealed beyond the level that people want to see...completely exposed...no wonder we all wear masks...Exit light...Enter night...Take my hand...We're off to...

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very interesting piece...great imagery david. i like this one a lot. well done!

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Nicely done, David.I especially liked the penny saving metaphor.CB

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Thank you all for reading and your commentstake care david

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I think I have to give up, or at least go on to other things and limit my rereading of this poem. Each time I think I know what you are saying until I get to the last four lines. Although I find them...

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